REvised storyboard and script

The two bottom pics are reveresd, please keep that in mind.
I decided to change the story board a bit because I thought the last one was a little too thin.


SCRIPT

P1
One

A sky high view of a vast forest, there is a mountain near the edge; a dragon is flying and a zeppelin; a clear sky is over head; in the distance is a city.
Caption One: neiklot
Caption Two: a world where magic an technology coexist in harmony.

Two

A marker that looks like a house is shown; this is the symbol of the guild association; it is on a unique emblem, worn and old.
Caption One: But the world is also filled with many dangers, so guilds were created, allowing those with the skills and talent to join with others like them and get jobs. Many of them have achieved great prestige for their Valiant efforts, and others are more obscure and small.

Three

another emblem is shown, showing the head of a jester; is is a little greasy an rusty.
Caption One: This guild in particular, Wildcard, is great but small.
Caption Two: And they will soon be known as one of the greatest guilds in history.

P2
One

The emblem showed in the previous page is shown on an old door; the rest of the place is dusty and crackling;
Caption One: But as of now, they’re a backwashed group of four, with the sudden addition of a fifth.

Title: WildCard Pack: Taking the Challenge!

P3
One

a boy walks along a path; he is wearing goggles, scarf, a katana , and is holding a flyer; he looks concerned and lost.
Bubble One: I hope I took the right path. The directions were pretty vague, but then again I’m new to this town after all.
Besides, They wouldn’t just make a trap for newcomers right?
Two

flyer, dusty and wrinkled, shows the WildCard symbol held in the boy’s hand.


Three

an old house is shown, it’s small and not at all attractive; there is a tree in the back, and on the side is a view of the sea and port; the windows are clean, with the silhouette of a person on the top window.
Bubble One: Huh. I guess the directions were right. Hope they’ll let me join.

P4

One

boy opens the door, with a loud creak as it opens; house is dark, and it doesn’t seem that anyone is there.
Bubble One: Hello, the door was open. I’m here to join.

Two

shadowy figure, has human features.
Bubble: It seems we finally got one... Teheh.

Three

another shadowy figure; short, wearing a hat, and has a strange grin on his face.
Bubble: I know, let’s introduce ourselves, eh?

Four
explosion with a BOOMF; boy tries to block the smoke from getting into his mouth; is surprised
Bubble: He-- What?!!